It's not ok... because this is great!!! This has some euphoric and happy vibe, I always enjoy listening that porta lead in this kind of songs, the 'blips' at 0:20 are really cool too.
Only thing, the bassline is just too generic, I think these are the notes: D#, B, F#, and then C#. I usually hear that bassline in lot of techno songs, I've even avoid to use it many times when I'm making melodies for my projects.
But in general really good track, hope you finish it sooner or later! :D